Sunday, February 8, 2009

Narratology


and we were in a living room eating fruit. from a bowl. An outside grew overwhelming and intrusive. A long, arduous thing, mostly gibberish. A club. As a huge hovering nothing attaching itself to the tops of buildings.

Engines.

There are tired screens. Some fruit. Some senseless horizon where tomorrow we’ll be jobs. Trees will impose on a wake. An oar.

3 comments:

Chris S said...

Good to see you posting on here, again, Jak. I like the picture and the prose piece. Especially the last couple of sentences; it really coheres nicely.

Jak Cardini said...

I just started a BFA creative writing program. They are forcing me to write poems everyday. I'm sure to be posting more.

Chris S said...

Hurray for school!