Thursday, February 7, 2008

di(re)vision



Here comes that sexy new revision I just done based on that old poem "Origin." Question: should I put quotation marks around the titles of my own poems? Kiss off!


Origin (revision 2)

so sidewalk so old
and slow and girl
and red dress;
I want your face

but I sleep in junkyards;
I'm just kicking the mud
in my
dreams.

I'm believing in heaven
and ocean roll,
I'm believing in the stars in my
mirror.
I'm waiting for you to say something.

tell me you're the fall,
that you wind and slip,
tell me that
you love to live to love to
dip.
tell me you love me.

1 comment:

kathryn said...

I like the entrance of junkyard sleep; I am still missing duress.